Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the high pace of world changing and also technology improvement, every simple thing has changed a lot during last decades. One of these changes is the way of food preparation. As the food market is a vast and profitable market, most of the businessmen are rapidly work on it to innovate new methods for more making it easier and also for more profit for themselves. hence we can feel that how fast this business is changing and absolutely it can improve our life considerably.
Following essay, will more illustrate my opinion:
First of all, because of today’s city lifestyle, people are very busy with different things and consequently they do not have too much time for cooking in the kitchens. But many thanks to the technology improvement and advent of electronic appliances to our kitchen. With the help of microwaves, refrigerators, ovens and many other appliances, now cooking is an easy and fast task and we can cook delicious food in a short time, hence we have more time to spend to our other tasks such as studying. it is very tangible for us to prepare a meal in les that 10 minutes.
In addition, with the transportation improvement, and also new packaging methods, we have easy access to fresh vegetables, meat, dairy products and many other food ingredient. having access to all these nutrition during all the year, absolutely would help us to improve our eating habit and being more healthy. For example, in the past fresh vegetables were not available in every region and it was very difficult to transport them, however today in short time different kind of edible products can be transport around the world in a short time. Therefore, we can find different nutrition international food ingredient in the markets.
In conclusion, as I explained above, nowadays, food preparation is an easy task which has many positive effects on our life. Because today we can cook fast and as result we can save more time for our other tasks and further more with easy access to different fresh products we can eat healthier. So according to all mentioned reasons our life has improved a lot because of easy food preparation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86612021858 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78076715135 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510928961749 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.973288088 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.733333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107177555667 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511057467923 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446463882059 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605043698658 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049424874731 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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