Without a shadow of a doubt, friends play an important role in every individual's life. Some people believe, that the ability to have a few number of friends over a long period of time is more important for the ability to make many new friends but for a short period of time. Others, hold the view, that it is important to have a plethora of friends merely for short period of time. I am of the opinion, that having deep long period friendships can well outweigh having shallow short period friendship. I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons in the ensuing lines.
One imperative idea coming to mind at first is about a person's self-reliance. It is crystal clear that each person has an exclusively certain type of ability. Consequently, on the condition that a person face to a problem s/he could readily count on his or her close friends to get help from. Besides s/he assures that his or her friends give a hand on that problems. According to Dr. Hasan Zohoor, a prominent and highly respected psychologist at the University of Tehran, if a person had a few close friends which he could count on them, he would have had a powerful self-esteem and also it leads to the gratification of that person's ego. To illustrate my point, let me elaborate upon it by presenting an explanation. Consider a boy embarking on studying for a university exam which that course is extremely difficult. He has to hammer on that courses for a long time, however, he has not enough time and loses his self-esteem. In this circumstance, if he had a close friend which could rely on, he would get some help from his friend and learn the course faster. Thereby, he acquires his self-confidence again.
Acquiring more prosperity is the second interesting point which deserves some words here. It goes without saying that close friends could suggest a plethora of advice to a person regarding that person being prosperous in his accomplishments. Owing to the fact that, close friends are invariably conveyed every detail information about their knowledge in order to be more helpful. Furthermore, this situation emancipates a person from having stress of prosperity in his life. Thus, the deeper friendship one has, the more success he would achieve in his life.
In conclusion, it is for all the aforementioned reasons, I have come to believe, that having the ability to maintain friendships with a few number of people for a long period of time is more important owing to not only does it leads to a person acquires more self-reliance, but it contributes to that person being prosperous in his or her life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...friends play an important role in every individuals life. Some people believe, that the abi...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...eople believe, that the ability to have a small number of friends over a long period of time is m...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e a small number of friends over a long period of time is more important for the ability to ma...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...o make many new friends but for a short period of time. Others, hold the view, that it is impo...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... a plethora of friends merely for short period of time. I am of the opinion, that having deep ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'assures'.
Suggestion: assures
... friends to get help from. Besides s/he assure that his or her friends give a hand on ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...o it leads to the gratification of that persons ego. To illustrate my point, let me ela...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Acquiring
... acquires his self-confidence again. acquiring more prosperity is the second interesti...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'conveyed'.
Suggestion: conveyed
...fact that, close friends are invariably convey every detail information about their kn...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...he ability to maintain friendships with few number of people for a long period of time is ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ps with few number of people for a long period of time is more important owing to not only doe...
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Message: Did you mean 'lead'?
Suggestion: lead
...ore important owing to not only does it leads to a person acquires more self-reliance...
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Message: Did you mean 'lead'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: lead
...ore important owing to not only does it leads to a person acquires more self-reliance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86355041647 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475555555556 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4505217139 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219039112327 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656340508958 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109553871223 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169539045463 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122152769072 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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