Since the dawn of humanity, relationships, which is among the most concerns of a human being. To acquire this phenomenon mankind always want to communicate with others. Despite the fact that relationship, especially friendship plays an important role in society, many people do not agree with close friendships is one goal of being happy in daily life. There are some pros and cons of this issue, which are discussed in details in the following paragraphs.
Without any shadow of doubt, the most important reason that comes to mind is that, if you have some close friends you can rely on them to tell your secrets. One of the most critical moments in all people’s life is that how they could handle their challenges in routine life. As a matter of the fact, if you can trust someone to tell your troubles, you will consult with him or her. This situation and this trust atmosphere do not come into account if cannot rely on that person, thus having some friend which to know each other for a long period of time is the main goal to achieve this purpose. Additionally, if you could solve your problems you probably would be happier in your life. In this regard, there is a particular research which is done at psychology department of University of Tehran, Iran, shown that if people could create trust climate and relaying atmosphere with others they will be happier. Statistics shown that the ability to make friends easily does not play an important role in making someone happy.
Aside from that, generally speaking, another reason that is equally important as the first one is you have more common things to speak in your routine life with your long-time friends. There is a Persian proverb that says, "You could find out a characteristics of someone’s by knowing his friends." This means that friends always effect on each other, so you are more similar to your friends which are known for long period of time to whom just meet him or her. Thus they could make you happy just by words. On the other hand, new people in your life have to spend a lot of time and energy to find something could make you happy. I have five friend which I just met them in first year of my bachelor, and a lot of friends which are communicate with them for short period of time. My close relationships is with the old friends, because they know all about me and it makes me happy.
Taking into account diverse matters, two of which were elaborated upon, I decided to have some close friends which they know me for a long period of time is better to the ability to make friends easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a characteristic; characteristics
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...o your friends which are known for long period of time to whom just meet him or her. Thus they...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...d of time to whom just meet him or her. Thus they could make you happy just by words...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'friend' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'friends'.
Suggestion: friends
...thing could make you happy. I have five friend which I just met them in first year of ...
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Suggestion: communicated
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...e friends which they know me for a long period of time is better to the ability to make friend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63913043478 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49005963291 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6639193517 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272218365676 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898156434783 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051284485436 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175989859329 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252994273878 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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