we all have friends. They may be few or many in number, or we had a friend for longer period or shorter period. In my opinion friends which is small in number and also having them in in ages will make our life joy full. I will explain each in the following essay.
First of all, in order to make one's life joyful, he/she must manage hers/his and beloved other behavior. And in order to manage the character they must be know each other. This process takes time. Therefor to have a bliss relationship with friends extended period may needed. Although be long time with someone adds intimacy between them so happier friendship will be created. My own experience is a compelling example of this. when i was a collage student I had a couple of friends for a longer period time even still now. As a life is full of tragedy they help me a lot to get over it. Its because of they know me better through time.
second reason is having a small number of friends teaches us to practice a commitment in our life. As this practice is well developed in our life, life will be easy in a work place and also in marriage. This is because if we have few friends in order to loss them we tend to treat them well or as needed. this life skill will also help as in later life as we have a husband/wife.
In general in order to have incredibly happy life, we need to learn from our friends this will be so easy when we have a few friends. we learn to take a good care of them because they are not to many to handle. Moreover staying with them in extended period is necessary, as it gives us to know each other, and make our life blissful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, well, in general, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19551282051 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24986074154 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474358974359 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3856462824 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.45 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137682792278 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049016964089 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450989127007 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999448629331 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464487069626 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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