TPO-50 - Independent Writing Task
all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
There are alot of significand and worth considering happenings in the history of a country. Most of the student always complain about history courses which they have to take it even it doesn't relate to their major. I, personally speaking, feel that it is vital and essential for the all students taking a history course. In what followed, the specific reasons supporting my perspective and viewpoint are vindicated.
To begin with, for country's improvements it is crutial that populations care about the country. it would be possible if the people get acquired with the country by studying its history. Seeking in the past events occured in the country gives the readers a wide and broad perspective about what happened in this area. These information consist of the wars, the brave men who did fight to preserve the country's independenece, the economic improvements, the technological achievement. if people get aware of the efforts for enhancing the country, they will be much care about the country; because they don't want to be the person who wastes the others achievements and improvements. To put it into a more vivid picture, my homeland, Iran, experienced lots of problems the main and significant problems was the 8-year war with Iraq. when my classmates and I were reading this important event and everything related to it such as the total number of people who were killed, we got shocked and sad. it promoted and motivated us to pay attention to the political and economical affairs more than before, and do everything which can help the society.
Moreover, it is embarresing for people not knowing anything about their culture and history when a straingers ask. Expressing our vigorous and strong culture and history of our country shows our interest in our homeland clearly. As an example, we, all iranian guys, always talks about our history like the great cyrous.
In conclusion, taking all the aforementioned reasons, in my book it is nessecary to take a history course in the university. that is because of caring much more than past and being proud of our country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rses which they have to take it even it doesnt relate to their major. I, personally sp...
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...hat populations care about the country. it would be possible if the people get acq...
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Suggestion: This information; These informations
...ctive about what happened in this area. These information consist of the wars, the brave men who ...
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...vements, the technological achievement. if people get aware of the efforts for enh...
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...ch care about the country; because they dont want to be the person who wastes the ot...
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... problems was the 8-year war with Iraq. when my classmates and I were reading this i...
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...ho were killed, we got shocked and sad. it promoted and motivated us to pay attent...
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...s to pay attention to the political and economical affairs more than before, and do everyt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00574712644 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8217439762 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566091954023 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0239961932 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.470588235 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138192868163 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475705559118 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489351968474 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104191957259 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585919161763 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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