TPO 50 Q1
history for every nation is the wealth of their culture and characteristic. Although some people disagree with the obligation to take history courses in attention to their field of study, I agree with the statement. also, I have some reasons which I will explain two of them in blowing paragraphs.
First and foremost, reading history and learning about every failure and challenges is inspirational for students in the university. In addition, studying various aspect of nations and their challenges as similar to human beings' all around the world, improve their creativity in their courses. For instance, I can remember one of my classmates
who improved and altered the recognition methods in protein analysis which was a complicated and unreliable, as we had studied in the history of methods in history courses in the university, and made her study more and invent a new way in the laboratory with the conscious of prior challenges and failures in the history.
Moreover, students would be more target-oriented when they know about the target and dream of pioneers in any area of knowledge. also, their vision would be getting into missions of students in our contemporary era, and make vast their envision horizons to invent and produce more sophisticated methods. As I mentioned in the last paragraph, my classmate got into the new field of our major and found her way to become a researcher in the laboratory of one of the most famous pharmaceutical company.
All in all, studying and taking history courses is not only inspirational for the students but also target-oriented for them to achieve novel and precious notions in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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history for every nation is the wealth of their...
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Suggestion: Also
...m of pioneers in any area of knowledge. also, their vision would be getting into mis...
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Suggestion:
...vel and precious notions in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11439114391 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9790506862 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542435424354 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1696911703 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.6 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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