In the recent decades, more and more people in the world have been able to connect with each other thanks to the advent of new technology as well as the Internet. Owning Internet connected devices has now become part of every individual in most countries. Although some governments believe that citizens should pay for their own Internet usage, I strongly agree with the idea that citizens should have the right to enjoy this service from governments without being charged.
There is no doubt that the Internet gives us the fastest and most convenient access to most information we may need in our life. This advanced technology has even been applied in warning citizens about prospective disasters that may threaten their life. Therefore, having Internet connection to obtain crucial information is a must if we want to survive in this fast-paced world. For example, Seoul governments had used Internet to spread the warning about a possible stampede in one of its districts, which helped many citizens to be able to get away and avoid the disaster. If it hadn't been for quick connection via free Internet offered in the city, a heartbroken incident might have happened. This is a typical example as for why the Internet should be available for all residents and thus provide them with sufficient information, especially on death-life matters.
Another reason why each local governments should consider installing free wifi in their city is that it strengthens and encourages the development of the country and the world as a whole. It is clear that we are living in a modern world where information has become one of the most valuable resources beside natural ones, such as gas and diesel. As a result, the most developed countries are ones that do not only have abundant resources but also instant access to important statistics and updates concerning the world’s economy and military situations. If all residents are able to use the Internet service, no matter where or when they are in the country, this will definitely be conducive to speeding up growth pace of the country. Even though employing that may cost a prohibitive amount in funding budget, the benefits it brings will be worthwhile.
In conclusion, since the Internet greatly contributes to the better life quality of citizens as well as the speedy rate of the country’s development, it should be considered as necessary as other services and facilities such as public transports and buildings. Governments should take steps to improve this important service if they truly care about citizens’ life and the country’s growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
... get away and avoid the disaster. If it hadnt been for quick connection via free Inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11007025761 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78257001635 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545667447307 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8744212925 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.375 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6875 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270930159947 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840667203591 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453861479296 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167367310587 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229953132835 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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