It goes without saying technology have changed our life significantly, beginning with the industrial revolution. Despite it's abundant benefits, some people believe that the drawbacks outweigh the advantages, and it makes us lazy and stupid. I, with respect to them, strongly disagree. Hence, it not only makes our life easier, but also enhance our talent and creativity. Thanks to technology, new methods of education have been invented that makes tough learning moments enjoyable. Besides, it leaves us with more free time. Last but not least, a variety of recreation are in hand.
First reason convince me to believe this way is technology accelerate finding information and also simplify learning, at the same time. I assume, creativity closely related to knowledge and information we obtain. For example, if one wants to invent a new source of energy, he or she has to equipped with lates research, discoveries, and as well as basic knowledge about physics. The Internet, which is one of the essential technology's fruit, provide us with inexpensive and reliable sources by just a click. Furthermore, online courses are available on the net for hectic city dwellers who are enthusiastic grasping novel materials.
Second, today, technology perform our dull daily activities and help us have more free time, including a variety of jobs such as washing clothes, shopping, and so forth. For instance, in gloomy days of the past, we had to spend our valuable time in bank to pay our bills, but now computers and the Internet furnish easy paying. With this in mind, people have more free time to think, learn, and invent new things using their boosted creativity.
Ultimately, technology makes diversity of entertainments such as video games, TV shows, series, online hobbies, and so forth.For me, the most delightful activity is playing soccer simulator with my Play Station. Some experts, based on the latest experimental results, claim relationship between creativity and happiness, pointing out, people who have more pleasurable moment during the day, are more tend to be innovative. Thus, we have to be grateful for living in this exotic and magic era.
For all the reasons that I have stated, I presume, on the contrary, technology makes humankind more adroit. Apart from equipping comfortable life for each member of society, it enables human beings to reach information in a twinkling of an eye. Therefore, no one in his or her proper mind can underestimate impact of technology on flourishing their brain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23891625616 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84573589236 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3687282219 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.80952380952 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962480354395 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308087281246 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262062318014 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552468891327 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161612150928 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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