TPO26-independent
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that in today's sophisticated world we live, taking an appropriate job plays a prominent role in the quality of our lives. Some may think it is better for children to select jobs which are analogous to their parents' job. While, others may believe that it is more beneficial for children to choose jobs that have more difference from their parents' career. I personally concur with the former group's idea. In what follows, my reasons supporting this opinion would be delineated.
To begin with, children who choose occupation which is similar to their parents' job can be more successful in a shorter amount of time. It is evident that in most cases, being prosperous in any career needs lots of time. At first time, you should adjust yourself with the atmosphere of the workplace. After that you have to learn how to increase your efficacy of the work. Thus, children would utilize the experiences of their parents in the best manner and reach to their goals as soon as possible.
The second reason is rooted in the fact that in this way children have fewer faults during their work. As I said at first paragraph, they use their parents' experiences in order to not to go wrong. Making mistakes are common amongst workers. However, for promotion of quality of the job and having more productivity employees should take their responsibilities and decrease their mistakes. Consequently, we can find out, children can do their jobs as they use the best methods which are suggested from their parents.
Last but not least, children's self-alliance will be enhanced. People who have a significant knowledge about all aspect of their jobs have more self-confidence than others. They know how they can remove obstacles during their work no matter how the problem is big. They can come up with creative solutions that cause them to increase the feeling of usefulness in their workplace.
In conclusion, based on aforementioned grounds, it is more beneficial for children to pursue their parents' job in order to increase their self-confidence and approach their purposes sooner than expected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 437, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...er. I personally concur with the former groups idea. In what follows, my reasons suppo...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f with the atmosphere of the workplace. After that you have to learn how to increase ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'in most cases', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234693877551 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.158163265306 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0790816326531 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0331632653061 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.094387755102 0.0685040099705 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.135204081633 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0280612244898 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74267113161 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331632653061 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00510204081633 0.00188951952338 270% => OK
Determiners: 0.0663265306122 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0331632653061 0.0209618222197 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0280612244898 0.0139019557991 202% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2134.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 358.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96089385475 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335195530726 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231843575419 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173184357542 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111731843575 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74267113161 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539106145251 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 58.8613278663 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4173502407 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.0843575419 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.39285714286 1.45489161554 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0865445600197 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785059560224 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.469386317612 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16741139663 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350738849087 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0944070453523 0.067059652881 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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