TPO32——Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of
society as a whole.
Living in the society with a galloping rate of development, no one can turn a blind eye to recent debates over whether young people today have influence on important issues. Different people hold different views due to their distinct backgrounds and perspectives. Some people adhere to the point that youngsters have no influence on significant problems of the society while others believe that young people are actually of great importance over those issues. As a matter of fact, this is so complicated and controversial that it is impossible to find a universal answer to the question. Nevertheless, to some extent, I am firmly leaning towards the latter. The following argumentation can substantially verify my standpoint.
Firstly, the youth is admittedly playing an integral role in today's society through the internet, especially those prevailing social networks. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg is co-founder and CEO of the social-networking website Facebook, the user base of which has grown to more than two billion people, also one of the world's youngest billionaires. He founded the social-networking website Facebook out of his college dormitory room. Since then, Mark Zuckerberg can be credited with giving millions of people around the world a new way to stay connected with friends and family and to discover what's going on in their communities. That is definitely changing the world's view and perspective of the current society.
On top of that, I want to point out that young people is showed to be much more enthusiastic and energetic than older ones. They care about the development of nowadays society, the living condition of the people in poverty, the interaction between countries, the solutions to deal with the environmental problems. Take my friend as an example, once she saw a news that the government is going to build a dam over a river, which is proved to be harmful to the environment as well as the climate, in her hometown. She made up her mind immediately to boycott this plan by holding a demonstration. In merely three days, she gathered about a thousand people to back up her viewpoint by joining the parade, which can perfectly demonstrate that young people today can totally be a rallying point for the society.
Granted, we shall never neglect that there happens to be less young people in the headquarters or the decision-making group of important social issues. Thus, some people seem like live under the illusion that youngsters are of no use to their country as well as the society. However, they fail to take into account the fact that young people influenced those decisions to a great extend through various ways without acting as decision maker.
On the basis of above statements, I believe that young people is playing a vital role in determine the future of our society as a whole, which has been empirically proven by the above statements. Although they maybe not the decision maker of a party or the government, this cannot lead to the conclusion that they have no influence on the issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the youngest'.
Suggestion: worlds the youngest
...han two billion people, also one of the worlds youngest billionaires. He founded the social-net...
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Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...with friends and family and to discover whats going on in their communities. That is ...
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Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...nities. That is definitely changing the worlds view and perspective of the current soc...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...e my friend as an example, once she saw a news that the government is going to build a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, as a matter of fact, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2548.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04554455446 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95407185682 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532673267327 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5832385269 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0476190476 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255059200059 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655637476479 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066458543139 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144703708001 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677736935536 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.