travel to somewhere near or somewhere far
There is no shortage of debate about whether it is better to travel somewhere near. In this regard, many individuals hold the view that it is vital of importance to mainly focus on the traveling to somewhere far. However, there are other opinions that it is essential to travel near. I am personally inclined to believe that the former approach pales in comparison to the latter. I cling to this viewpoint for two persuasive reasons which I shed light upon them in the following paragraphs.
The first pivotal reason which exhorted me to opt for this point of view is having more trips but inexpensive ones. Traveling somewhere far especially going to abroad not only costs more but also needs changing the currency. In this case, because of the sanctions, currency in my country is not worthwhile for changing to the destination’s currency and it costs a lot for traveling abroad. Instead of that, if you choose some amazing destinations near you, you can go there by less cost. not only can you go there easier but also go to many of them, many times. My friend’s experience drives the idea home. She is an adventurous traveler. She does not earn a lot but she has traveled to every piece of her region, the places where people know rarely. For example, when she wants goes to a summit, she hitches hike parts of her way, climb to the summit, camps there and enjoys the nature. So, she has marvelous experiences of her travels in an easy way.
The other equally compelling reason in corroborating my stance is discovering everything near you. Traveling somewhere near helps you to focus on your region. You can learn more about the environment, the culture and the traditions that surrounded you which you have never paid attention to them. In this way, you can boost your knowledge about your homeland and your roots there which is exquisite. By way of illustration, my uncle was an anthropologist who likes doing research in his homeland. So, he traveled everywhere in his area and collected more information about social habits, traditions, handicrafts which compelled them in a book. The book presented varieties of useful information and is used in many anthropology colleges for years.
By perusing the above paragraphs, it can be concluded that not only do you have lots of fun by traveling somewhere near but also you can enrich your general information. Generally speaking, the more travels to nearby the more experiences taken.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Not
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Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...as marvelous experiences of her travels in an easy way. The other equally compelling reason ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88729016787 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82407676956 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534772182254 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5054091975 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9166666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.20833333333 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268103392924 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884060815439 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125182215843 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207084394306 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973566069224 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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