Traveling to other countries is a way for people to take time away from their daily worries. While visiting a foreign country, some people like to go to the tourist attractions while others prefer going to quiet places where they can truly enjoy the country’s culture.
The topic presented the controversial issue of purpose behind travelling. Indisputably, people all over the world travel to any foreign countries to see the famous things and monuments presented there. They has purpose to discern the worlds of world that they have seen many times in televisions or in mobile with their naked eyes. Nevertheless, there are several peopel of opposite side of the coin. These people want to travel to scotch their oscillating mind by experiencing a different foreign culture. Such culture generally found in quiet place provides healing effects to human mental problems. Therefore, in my case, I would like to visit quiet places when it comes to visiting abroad and point out several reasons for such preference.
First of all, silence is called a great healer to human mental issues. In the present world, several issues, problems, and works are troubling the human being in several ways. The major effect is seen in people nervous system. Earler, psycological concerns were not so common as they are todays. Due to these, the population are aching for rest. They are looking for places, which is far away from their offices, and boss reach. To mitigate their disorder, and enjoy a different environment, people visit abroad. Consequently, I also prefer to have meditation in the rocky hill of Himalayas, when it comes to taking off from office mundane work.
Furthermore, some visits abroad to know the different culture of that place, a foreign place. The culture of a place does not reflected in the tourist places since those places were the culture monuments at times in the history but now they are not. The customes, and traditions are generally reflected in the peopole who lives in villages, and country sides. This situation specially comes to true when we want to know more about other countries people behaviour, their traditional attire, their customs and their history. For instance, last year when I went to USA to complete my thesis on New England Historical monuments, my professor recommended me to visit Mississipi river rather than spending night life in New York. When I visited that river, I came to know about the trade that used to happen between Native americans and Colonists people.
Admittedly, whenever a person invest his or her saving to tour a foreign country, he or she wants to save some memories. Posting images in social media platforms such as Facebook and Instagram and talking to his or her friends about wonderful trip are the evidences and memory of person's journey. This is true specially when it comes to investment of large sum of money and large some of time in the present fast running world. However, the above purpose does not fulfill and meets the criteria for everyone. Because, every person has different needs and purposes for visit to abroad. Some wants to see the Taj Mahal of Agra while others want to visit the temples of Varanasi.
In conclusion, I prefer the latter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ngs and monuments presented there. They has purpose to discern the worlds of world ...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'reflect'
Suggestion: reflect
... place. The culture of a place does not reflected in the tourist places since those place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2473.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98588709677 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57153049529 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558467741935 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2523722148 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3214285714 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287806718407 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633590794092 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051195374646 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136255244792 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579269382946 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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