Traveling to other countries is a way for people to take time away from their daily worries. While visiting a foreign country, some people like to go to the tourist attractions while others prefer going to quiet places where they can truly enjoy the country’s culture.
The topic presented a very unique issue of people desire while travelling to foreign countries. Everyone likes travelling. There could be several reasons for having an inclination towards it. Some like to have a break from their day to day busy work life, some go for travelling to explore new places and other might go to enjoy new culture, country and people. Some people while visiting abroad prefer to see best tourist attraction of the country, on the other hand, there are many people who like to explore the country culture and visit quite places. In my view, I would prefer to see the tourist places more than to spend time to know the country's culture. There are some reasons for my preference for one over another.
First of all, whenever we visit abroad, we always have a definite purpose behind it. We invest our time, money, and many things when we go for a tour. So, it is always important for us to get maximum from our journey. The maximum of our journey can be achieved when we complete our purpose for visit. For instance, last year when I went to USA, I visited almost several USA universities. Everyone knows that United States has world's top universities such as MIT, Stanford, Columbia, etc. I saw these universities iconic buildings, and felt the feeling of students who were studying there. I went to President White House, which is dream for anyone who visits to USA. Therefore, as other people, I attracted towards best tourist attraction presented in the country I visited.
Secondly, it is much depends on the person's nature, and profession that which places he or she will prefer during his or her foreign journey. A college boy who is so much social and extrovert would certainly enjoy the energy of tourist places. The college students have already been heard so many times the marvelous structures for which a country is famous in the world. They want to have pics with those tourist monuments. Whether there are the pyramids of great Egypt or the Tajmahal of Agra, India, people want to save their memories of their journey. So, this can be better captured when they visit a famous tourist place.
Amittedly, there are people who want to explore the culture of different countries and they visit to these countries to get understanding about it. Generally, these people are not first time going abroad citizens. These people had funds and purpose that they invest to enhance their understanding about a country rather than having pics for posting social networking sites. However, this type of situation generally found when people visit for research purpose and increasing their contents towards writing or paintings. Common people wants to save their memories from their journey in their cameras, want to post those images in Facebooks or Instagrams and to show among their friends.
In sum, visiting a foreign country is always exciting for people and people desire maximum output with minimum resources investment. The journey are also seen as to have less expenses and more memory. This can be generated only when you visit best tourist places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ry. This can be generated only when you visit best tourist places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, such as, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2588.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94837476099 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44102295277 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485659655832 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 805.5 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1209283154 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4333333333 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63333333333 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424570419114 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10225910307 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838759430592 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243325448535 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114753018345 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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