Knowledge is an important part of our life. Some people prefer having deep knowledge about one particular subject, while others prefer having widespread knowledge about a variety of subjects. Which do you prefer and why?
The topic presented the controversial issue of importance between in-depth knowledge of a field and superficial knowledge of several fields. Knowledge is paramount to survival of human beings on Earth. Some consider this as a form of education that people receive at Schools and Universities while others invision it as knowledge beyond professional circle. Additionally, some people give preference to deep insights of one particular subject while some prefer to have widespread insights of several subjects. I generally agree with the several field knowledge over single field knowledge. I present several reasons for my view in the following paragraphs.
First of all, multifaceted education or knowledge make a person all rounder active. I would like to point out that the more subjects you know, the less trouble you would get in career. To illustrate, let us look at the example of jobs in market. People who knows to accomodate themselves according to situations, people who possess several skills such as communication, technical, bargaining and marketing and people who easily locate themselves according to company demand are always preferred in each and every companies. In this circumstance, obviously companies has several tasks that they wanted to get done from their employees. In the same time, companies also want to cut the cost of their operations and management. Therefore, they always want to hire a person who can work in operation, technology and management in the same time.
Secondly, human like to have understanding of several subjects at a time. It helps him or her in case of poor situation like economic crisis, firing, and any unforeseen events. Specifically, students who possess several talents and skills get jobs even in very poor economic situation of company. Last year, when COVID-19 attacked in India, there were several of my friends lost their job. There were mechanical engineers, civil engineers, management professionals and other profession related persons. In that situation, student who change themselves according to the condition and who already had some knowledge of several other subjects got job easily in the market.
Admittedly, being expert in any field is very challenging but the same way it is so much respected and rewarded. A doctorate in petroleum energy sector would always get more remunration than a petroleum engineer who only did undergraduation. This is specially true in case of jobs that require special education, and expert knowledge of the field. However, in the market, more than 80 percentage jobs are available in those sectors that do not require experts. These market require all rounder workforce.
In conclusion, although connoisures of a field whether it is engineering or medical are rewarded more than a rookie, but the space available for all rounder or several skills possessing person are more and readily available.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36244541485 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96959606535 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53711790393 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5576265266 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.24 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.32 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21637817684 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559390839183 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827792016415 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112304931168 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122827119258 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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