Print media, including Magazines and newspapers, will soon be completely replaced by internet news source.
News is a powerful source of updating oneself about his or her surroundings events. News can be about anything; it can be about our school, college, city; it can be about our country's parliament, our favourite politician. Some people receive news from papers, magazines while some from internet. With the current technological inventions, the internet media is growing rapidly, and it can be opined that soon the soft medium (YouTube, websites, etc.) of news would definitely replace the hard medium (magazines, newspapers) of news. It is because of following reasons.
Firstly, the internet media takes very less time as compared to conventional newspapers to communicate a news to its customers. This service boost the proclivity of readers to internet news sources. If any event happens in any part of the world, through the internet we get the news in couple of minutes. For instance, when I was studying in final year of college, in my city there was a situation of flood. We were keep updating ourselves through internet news about weather report. And finally, when the time of flood came, with the help of live news, we were able to vacate the house safely. This way, the internet news even the saved the life and property of public, and people provide time to prepare for their appropriate actions.
Secondly, with the help of internet news, we have several options of news source. We can google the several news sites and read the news through our concern. For instance, if a person do not like a content from a times of India, then he can read the same news from economic times or the hindu. Even, a person can check the authenticity of a news from internet by searching the source of news or comparing it with other news sources.
Thirdly, the live news reporting from broadcasting agencies. This is the major benefit of internet media over paper media. If a news is about India's culture then the paper news can only show us the pics of Indian culture but the web media can provide the picture or film of the same Indian culture, which would more attractive to audience.
In conclusion, we are more affected from a news when we listen, see and hear it; which the internet media provide us. Paper media only provides reading and seeing. Hence, the communication a content from a provide to a receiver is more effective with the help of internet news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
... if a person do not like a content from a times of India, then he can read the same new...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
... a person can check the authenticity of a news from internet by searching the source o...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...Hence, the communication a content from a provide to a receiver is more effective with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78239608802 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55217376053 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486552567237 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3769572498 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0434782609 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7826086957 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267491038567 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903966285805 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049085112826 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162560663755 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339210434235 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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