People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
This topic presents the controversial issue of decision based on emotions and based on logic. Indisputably, we should not think rationally and logically in every controversial issue ; some decision ought to be based on emotional. Nevertheless, we should not forget for logic during making emotional decisions, as eventually we will only get what we had invested. Generally, decisions are based on the situations, reactions, and emotions. Thus, I generally agree with the opinion that emotional decision makers who try to rationalize their decisions later, are inadequate in decision making.
First of all, decisions are important in life, a decision can affect from one person to billion of people. If we talk about, what America did to Iraq after 9/11 attacks are more emotional based decision. After 9/11 American administrations were shocked and deeply affected. So after this, whatever come in their path to hide the responsible person behind this attack, they try to ruined it. Similarly, in India, in 1992, at Ram born place, Ayodhya, a Babri Masjid was demolished. The surrounding sentiments of that time forced even politicians to support this, although they are behind all this. Now later on, after demolition, they were justifying their demolition as it is Ram place and a temple should be established.
Secondly, My friend Jack who is very well research areas, have been beaten by police officers because of some unnecessary issues. He was deeply shocked and broken by this accident and decided to take revenge. He knew that he could not fight directly with police officials, hence he decided to become IAS, Indian Administrative Service officers, head of a district. He prepared very hard for this and finally cleared it. Now, ultimately he became a powerful person and he justify his decision of choosing this field but, if he had gone for research field, the story would be different. In this case, I would say his decision was not justified because it was taken by emotional condition.
Admittedly, we as human being can be rational every time. Decision of banning on cow slaughter in India is based on emotional and many people justify it. As their emotions have attached with Cow. Hindu worship cow in their home.
In conclusion, although there are some cases where emotion must be their behind decisions, but it should not be generalize. This types of claims does not provide sufficient reasoning to claim this. Hence decision should be based on logic and according to surrounding conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1512195122 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80202827809 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565853658537 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6866198987 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.48 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318515679496 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982054639308 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116667066764 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187667619507 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118912720929 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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