The twentieth century has witnessed plethora of changes. There is no single soul that is not being touched by the advancements of this century. Right from tiny household inventions, that made our lives comfortamble, to huge advancements in the nuclear or space sciences, this century has seen it all. A remarkable change of this century is the introduction of the Internet that changed our lives significantly.
We live in the era of internet domination. The reason for choosing this remarkable change is that whatever we can think of, is one way or the other related to its usage. Everything is just one click away. For example, ordering food online or watching our favourite movie anything is possible with the help of internet. We can connect to our distant friends and acquaintances over Skype or other applications. Usage of internet has changed the way we percieve information. Not only personal space but also professional front has also been touched immensely with the introduction of internet. Infact, it is one of the reasons for millions of employments in todays scenario.
But as it is said, Every good thing comes with a cost. We have become so dependent on it's usage that we can't even imagine ourselves without it. Nowadays, we trust internet more than our beliefs and instincts. Although there is a lot of useful information available online, there is also information that can exploit people . We are exposed to the threat of losing our identity and data. Cyber crime has become so prevalant that we have become its victim even without our consent.
To recaptulate, I would like to say that introduction of internet has altered the picture of the world completely and is indeed one of the significant changes of the twentiteh century.This not only has opened a huge range of opportunities for this century but also paved a path for bright future of all if used in a correct manner.
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...a path for bright future of all if used in a correct manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93769470405 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88105206759 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.8093011444 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4210526316 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112675290543 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394466522369 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05266000189 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773790323712 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525162535348 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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