Cars has been evaluated as one of the detrimental factors in our societies by scientists. People believe their negative results are more than positive ones so far and all governments try reducing them by developmental plans and motivations for their citizens. I agree with the prediction that says there will be fewer cars in future because of some reasons.
First of all, change of our universe shows many current activities will be replaced by online methods and consequently demand of automobiles will be decreased in a surprisingly trend. Persons now tend to provide their many needs including books, foods, clothes and any other goods by internet instead of going to the places by driving and buy them. For example, the biggest company in the world nowadays is the electronic commerce website which offers any product and delivers it to your home and this indicates the emergence of online buying behavior in our modern life.
Furthermore, resources of fossil fuels have been vanished by human being in recent years and this makes car companies to invent electronic types of this means of transportation. On the other hand the supporters of living environment have affected on politicians to set some regulations replacing this device in order to prevent air pollution. For instance, the latest meeting of countries which was about global warming effects concluded that all nations should facilitate the transfer by public models like metro or buses and this proves how cars will be fewer in further days.
Additionally, our lifestyle has been varied in comparison with the past years and individuals are not interested in roaming in cities any more. They are tired of being in traffic because they know the time is gold for them in these era and they should use it as the best efficient manner. The medias introduce traffic as a bad costing happening for their society and schools teach to our children how to avoid this unwanted phenomena. For example, online taxies has been designed to motivate people with this goal that they can order a cheap taxi and not bringing their car just for taking them to work.
In conclusion, there many fans of cars in our world who love them and even respect this invention but the facts inform us gradually all buddies will accept they must use many alternatives to help our earth and manage the expenses of countries in a rational style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: A_RB_NN
Message: You used an adverb ('surprisingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('trend') instead of another adjective.
...and of automobiles will be decreased in a surprisingly trend. Persons now tend to provide their many...
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this era' or 'these eras'?
Suggestion: this era; these eras
... they know the time is gold for them in these era and they should use it as the best effi...
Line 9, column 244, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a rational style" with adverb for "rational"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...th and manage the expenses of countries in a rational style.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97256857855 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62678640943 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59102244389 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1150402664 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.428571429 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6428571429 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206793125506 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709635255749 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691914481377 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114771013273 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042090569317 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.