In twenty years there will be less cars in use than there are today
Cars have been a part of our lives for many decades as it was an outstanding invention which kept its spark alive for many generations. But as the times are changing, people are thinking about better alternatives. I agree that in twenty years from now, there will be fewer cars than today due to following three reasons.
Firstly, people these days are more aware about global warming. The negative effects of fuel consumption on environment have been studied over the years; looking at various research data it can be concluded that burning fossil fuel in vehicles need to be replaced with much sustainable alternative. Hence, the governments of various countries today are stressing more on electric cars as well as green gases, that can be used in place of fuels. But using such alternatives is becoming difficult because generating electricity and other kind of energy resources for cars also require processes that involve environmental degradation to some point. Therefore, reducing number of cars is the most feasible solution to a slew of environmental problems. For instance, Delhi government came out with a solution of this problem and implemented a new law; the 'Odd Even Law'. This law allowed only cars with odd number plates to be used on odd number of date and vice versa for cars with even number of plates. This law significantly reduced the total number of cars on the roads leading to a decrease in air pollution.
Furthermore, as the population is increasing gradually, traffic on roads is becoming a problem. For instance, a person who needs to leave for office prefers to travel with their own car; single person travelling with a car having four seats requires more space on roads. This type of commute is causing accumulation of more number of vehicles on roads leading to increased traffic. To tackle this problem many governments are encouraging cab services that charge minimal amount of money to drop people to offices. This way people do not have to drive themselves to offices everyday and it also helps in decreasing the traffic on roads.
Lastly, many people do not prefer driving on their on everyday to work. This is because they feel that driving everyday is stressful and tiring. Grabbing this problem as an opportunity, many cab companies offer coupons if the travel is towards the workplace. Hence, people get discounts when they travel to their workplace and it allows them to travel by cabs or busses more frequently. Most of the professional do not consider buying a car a goof financial decision as its value decreases over time and hence they invest their money in other ventures. Also, the improving connectivity of local transportation in almost all the cities now days do not leave any need to own a car.
In conclusion, as buying a car is becoming less attractive for the customers in current times, both financially or concerning environmental issues, less people are interested in owning their own vehicle these days.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...not have to drive themselves to offices everyday and it also helps in decreasing the tra...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...eople do not prefer driving on their on everyday to work. This is because they feel that...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... This is because they feel that driving everyday is stressful and tiring. Grabbing this ...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...lly or concerning environmental issues, less people are interested in owning their o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99195171026 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77644416389 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539235412475 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9801897318 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.869565217 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6086956522 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223402792015 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566798979796 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964551458174 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120800321966 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869551218935 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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