Univeristy should use taxes to fully fund universities so that students can study for free.
There is no shortage of opinion on whether the government should support students to attend universities. Some agree that government should utilize taxes to support universities so that students can study for free. Others argue that students should pay tuition on their own even though the tuition may be high. It is my firm belief that government should not use taxes for students' university tuition and I will develop these ideas in the following paragraphs.
First of all, the taxes collected from citizens should be used for more practical purposes such as infrastructure. The important reason is that this money should benefit all citizens instead of a small group of people who attend universities. For example, the government of my country constructed a high-speed railway in recent years. This construction boosted the economic and commerce opportunities around the nation and provided tons of job opportunities. Moreover, the railway significantly decreases commuting times for people so that they can save time for themselves to stay with their families. It is certainly clear that government spending money on infrastructure is better as it can provide welfare for the whole nation.
Secondly, if the tuition is free, some students will take education for granted. This results that students do not cherish the opportunities of attending universities. My personal experience is a great example of this. In my hometown, Taiwan, the cost to attend university is quite cheap. As a result, many of my classmates in university did not care about the education resources. They tended to skip lectures easily. Not to mention if the tuition is free, the situation may become worse. For this reason, I strongly think that students should pay tuition for themselves.
Although some people argue that young people can not afford the cost without the government’s support as the tuition to attend university is expensive, in many nations, there are many student loans from the government, charity funds, and many non-government organizations. For students who want to attend universities, it is not difficult to find these resources so that they have the opportunities for educations.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that government should not use taxes to support students’ tuition for universities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37329700272 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05405714301 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49863760218 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6389958217 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9047619048 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35692014429 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114575237507 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112787075749 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225455025117 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872509004041 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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