There is no shortage of opinions about which group of people deserves financial help from the government. In my view, I maintain that jobless people aged 70 or above need assistance from the government. It is my firm belief that they require support from the government and I will explore my ideas in the following paragraphs.
First of all, aged people usually have difficulties finding jobs. It is a fact that there is more demand for young people in the job market. Because their compensations are cheaper and they are easy to be trained. For example, my uncle who is fifty has been looking for jobs for several months without any luck. However, my sister who is a new graduate got a job within one month of her graduation. As a result, I believe aged people require support from the government, especially people who are aged above seventy. Otherwise, they would have difficulties making a living.
In addition, aged people have more expenses for health issues. When people become older, their body conditions usually become worse and they have to visit doctors often. It takes a lot of money to afford medicines and pay the bills for the hospitals. Drawing from my grandfather’s example, he just turns seventy this year and he easily gets injured and feels pains in his body. Therefore, he has several appointments with doctors in a short time and it costs a lot of money that he can barely afford. It is obvious that aged people have higher living costs than other groups of people. If jobless aged people do not obtain assistance from the government, they will have problems living.
Although some people argue that young workers who recently lost jobs or young couples who have children require financial help from the government as well, it is a fact that those young people can find jobs. Moreover, the young generation should be trained to be strong and try to live by themselves. Hence, I still think that jobless people aged 70 deserve the assistance than other groups do.
In light of the reasons above, I strongly believe that jobless people aged seventh or above need and deserve financial help from the government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84741144414 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53147739838 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506811989101 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7931052982 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436786411937 0.236089414692 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119950213493 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115774060768 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264701188866 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134181314607 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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