University freshmen do not know much about university life and learning. There are two ways to help freshmen quickly enter university life, choose a method that you feel is better and explain why.
1) attending a one-week orientation or introduction program before starting the classes
2) meeting regularly in your first year with a student in your major field who has attended the university for several years.
Some people suggest a way to attend a one-week orientation or introduction program before starting the classes to help freshmen. However I believe that meeting regularly in first year with a student in same major field who has attended the university for several years is more appropriate for freshmen. This is because this way helps freshmen to consider following the right ways and to achieve their career goals.
First of all, meeting regularly with a student who has already attended the university helps freshmen to consider following the right ways. Since freshmen lack of enough experience, they usually follow the wrong path, especially when they are trouble. However, the method that I choose will prevent the problem. one of my experiences demonstrate this point of view. For example, when I was a freshmen, I wanted to take a financial accounting class. There were two professors who took a financial accounting class, Mr.Kim and Mr.Lim, and I could not sure who is better. So I asked a junior student, and he said it is better to take a business mathematics class before taking a financial accounting class because students who do not have knowledge about business mathematics cannot follow the financial accounting class. Consequently, I chose a business mathematics class and I would have wasted valuable time. In this regard, meeting with other student can help freshmen more effectively by leading them to the right path.
Moreover, the latter suggestion helps freshmen to achieve their career goals. Meeting with junior or senior students means that freshmen can obtain information about their career goals, which is good for their future career. For example, one of my friends wanted to work in a business consulting company when he was a freshmen. However, He did not know how to prepare his career. So he asked about that to a senior student, and the senior student recommended him to apply internship related to business strategy company and take a business strategy class. He followed that course that the senior student suggested, right now, he works in a business consulting company. In this regard, the latter suggestion helps freshmen to achieve their goals which means it is more helpful for freshmen..
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a freshman' or simply 'freshmen'?
Suggestion: a freshman; freshmen
... point of view. For example, when I was a freshmen, I wanted to take a financial accountin...
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Suggestion: Kim
...o took a financial accounting class, Mr.Kim and Mr.Lim, and I could not sure who is...
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Suggestion: Lim
...nancial accounting class, Mr.Kim and Mr.Lim, and I could not sure who is better. So...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...er goals. Meeting with junior or senior students means that freshmen can obtain informat...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a freshman' or simply 'freshmen'?
Suggestion: a freshman; freshmen
...business consulting company when he was a freshmen. However, He did not know how to prepar...
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...ch means it is more helpful for freshmen..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, moreover, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14520547945 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7026338425 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471232876712 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5389956525 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8421052632 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202741653639 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719770131359 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624137373706 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163568864421 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699346801875 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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