A university recognized that first-year students have poor study
skills and believed that the best way to address this problem is to
require all first-year students to take courses on study skills, while
others don't agree with this requirement. What is your opinion?
Having a high-quality academic is one the most significant issue in our societies;
therefore, it can not be ignored because when people are more erudite, they will
have more opportunities in life. When students go to the university, they are faced a
lot of new challenges. In my opinion, all students must should take courses on study
.skills. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay
First, high school is entirely different from university; consequently, studying for
courses, especially exams, is new for freshmen. In this case, taking a class on study
skills is cause to increase self-confidence at the result is they are adapting
themselves to university courses and their study more efficiently. If the freshmen
know the way path, they are more connected better to the systems; hence they have
more incentive to study besides they will not be disappointed because of the
problematic course or being in the new
.environment
Second, the student should learn how to study in the university. When I was a
freshman, I did not know how to study for university. I did not know how to deal with
courses in university because the assignments were totally different from high
school; I had not done research in high school; consequently, when I entered the
university, I was shocked because I did not learn how to research; as a result, I
faced my first challenge. Assignments and projects in the university based on
research, I did not train for this obstacle. According to this, my grades in the first
semester are deficient. If authorities held such classes, my rates would not be so
.low
In summary, I agree with the statement that students who have poor study skills
should take study skills courses, they are prepared for their ongoing studies in
.university and have the best function
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, i feel, in summary, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03870967742 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91924612166 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509677419355 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.9325424297 48.9658058833 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.53405017921 507% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275600943049 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117532466203 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772640014324 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850476976616 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072515727083 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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