Workers are more satisfied when they have many
different types of tasks to do during the workdays
than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the statement that says workers are more satisfied when they have
many different tasks to do during the workday. They are numerous reasons,
.among which two stand out
First of all, It should mention that when the workers do different types of tasks, it
is the opportunity to learn new things, and maybe they cause to improve their
resumes, and in the future, they can apply for a better job or even they can
.promote because they know more things to do
when the workers do different works among the day, they are challenging
,themselves
If they do similar tasks all day long, they can not challenge themselves or even
estimate how they are good. In this situation, workers will not be bored at all
.because their day is not dull. It is challenging, actually
For example, I work at the university as a lecturer; how can I improve my
knowledge if I teach one course along with all my career? As a result, I should
teach a variety of courses, helping me study more. Furthermore, if students come
.to me one day and ask me a question, I can help them better
The second reason is according the today's lifestyle; it is necessary to be
multi-tasking. If you do not have this ability, maybe you would not be successful
in nowadays society. According to researches, when people show the best version
.of themselves to others, they are more satisfied and feel better
Finally, doing the different types of tasks have more advantages. Workers can use
their minds in different ways; eventually, they have more self-confidence.Moreover, if workers believe their operation is better than in the past, besides
.this is good for the industry
To sum up, doing different types of tasks is more advantageous than we think; in
.addition, it is more than just satisfied workers
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...kers are more satisfied when they have many different tasks to do during the workday. They ar...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the workday. They are numerous reasons, .among which two stand out First of all,...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improving
... learn new things, and maybe they cause to improve their resumes, and in the future, they...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...apply for a better job or even they can .promote because they know more things to...
^^
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rks among the day, they are challenging ,themselves If they do similar tasks all...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ation, workers will not be bored at all .because their day is not dull. It is cha...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...udy more. Furthermore, if students come .to me one day and ask me a question, I c...
^^
Line 17, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ter The second reason is according the todays lifestyle; it is necessary to be multi...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...ity, maybe you would not be successful in nowadays society. According to researches, when ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ches, when people show the best version .of themselves to others, they are more s...
^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ntually, they have more self-confidence.Moreover, if workers believe their operation is ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ion is better than in the past, besides .this is good for the industry To sum up...
^^
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... is more advantageous than we think; in .addition, it is more than just satisfied...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, of course, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86129032258 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85356997505 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509677419355 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.072458548 48.9658058833 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.444444444 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4444444444 20.6045352989 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4444444444 5.45110844103 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510487927952 0.236089414692 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195790453927 0.076458572812 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177222272751 0.0737576698707 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143447678144 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128942268273 0.0645574589148 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 11.7677419355 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.002688172 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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