Museums own treasures and valuable items of a place, which often reflect its culture and history. There is an opinion that the best way to learn about a country is to visit its museums. Personally, I do not concur with this notion.
First of all, museums only reflect some particular parts of a country, mainly its culture and history. In most museums, the most common exhibits are historical items and art crafts, from which one can learn the historical development vividly. Some museums exhibit modern arts and crafts, mainly for aesthetic purposes, and in most countries, they look very similar. Speaking of technology, fewer museums specialize in this field, and most of them only present common scientific knowledge for children to explore. They are primarily used to broaden one's wisdom rather than show a country's latest and most advanced technologies.
In the second place, there are a lot more ways to learn about a country other than visiting museums. The development of the Internet helps everyone to obtain the latest information quicker than ever before. Besides, it has the most comprehensive information about what is trading in a country, thanks to big data. Nowadays, people can sit in their homes, and by clicking mouses, they are able to obtain all the information they want about any country in the world without effort. It is a far more convenient way than visiting museums one by one.
Moreover, one can also combine the Internet with actual experience for a better understanding of a country. For example, one would like to know the latest technological development of a country. They may first search the web for information and book a ticket for a technology exhibition that presents the most advanced technological developments of the country, which is far more than those exhibited in typical museums.
To put it in a nutshell, I restate my view that for one to best learn about a country, they should not only visit museums, but they can undoubtedly explore much more with the help of the Internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one's
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, for example, speaking of, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97352941176 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7429857069 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502941176471 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7815432507 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284756406759 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106239834814 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150594001935 0.0737576698707 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189146170917 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13242523661 0.0645574589148 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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