The ways to a person dresses is an indication to his or her personality or character.
Nowadays more and more people put attentions on their clothes when they attend an appointment or communicate with others. The way of a person dresses could reflect his or her personality and characteristics clearly and directly.
In order to leave a great first impression to others, people care about their clothes so much. Because this is the first general impression they left on others mind and it would determined how others judge you. For example, when a businessman tries to attend a meeting about discussing the partnership with another firm without acquaintances before, he wears a formal suit with a nice tie and a pair of clean shoes. Consequently, the partner firm gives him the chance to cooperate because one of the determined factor in this meeting is the businessman’s taste of his clothes, and it clear determined how well the man will treat the firm like his clothes.
Besides, a person will choose a specific type of clothes in order to fit in his or her personality. It will influence their actions and behaviors when they are shopping or choosing which kind of clothes to wear everyday. I will use my own case to illustrate this idea, as a teenager, I have a lot of jeans instead of formal clothes like my parents wear. Because these casual jeans could fit in all of my other clothes and represent my personality which is outgoing and open minded. When people talk to me, they will not feel any pressures since they could feel my easy going character from my simple clothes wear casually.
Last but not least, wearing and dressing could be a good way to communicate when they do not want to say it directly. They could choose their clothes in purpose in order to show their characteristics to people meet them. For instance, a girl want to attract a boy in a prom and want him to invite her for a dance but she is embarrassed to say it out loud about how nice she is. So she wears an elegant dress and the boy was attracted by her. Because he received her idea in this communication and acquaintances about how nice her taste is on her dress and clothes which could lead him to think about her as an elegant person.
In summary, a person’s dresses could represent his or her personality when they first meet others or in their normal life. Moreover, their intentional make up of their clothes could be a effective way to communicate and spread their traits to others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'determine'
Suggestion: determine
...n they left on others mind and it would determined how others judge you. For example, when...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...man apos;s taste of his clothes, and it clear determined how well the man will treat ...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... choosing which kind of clothes to wear everyday. I will use my own case to illustrate t...
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Line 9, column 191, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ional make up of their clothes could be a effective way to communicate and spread...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64637002342 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66105848826 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459016393443 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2936263877 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243929548768 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100362149628 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139531412199 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180237720937 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112703484438 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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