Do you agree or disagree? The way people dress is a good indication of his or her personality or character.
The way people dress is a good indication of his or her personality or character.
Being able to know one's personality can be of significant aid in developing a relationship with others and eschewing unpleasant experiences and encounters. There are several ways to have a glimpse into one's personality, and it is wildly held that attire is one. That someone's attire can be a good guide toward knowing their character is a contentious issue. Some people hold the conviction that the way someone dresses is a good representation of their personality; in contrast, others hold an alternative perspective and notion that there are other far more important ques to someone's personality. In this regard, I agree with the latter group for several reasons that will be delved more profoundly in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, judging others by their looks is a shallow and unsupported method; as the old saying goes: do not judge the books by their cover. In fact, a nice and appealing outlook is one of the most prevalent ways to deceive people and one of the most conventional methods of cunning. An excellent example of this can be those pyramid institutions that used travesty and deception by showing off lavish rental places as their own property, dressing up in elegant clothes, and using exquisitely cunning literature to trick people into believing them by all this illusive credence. Because they had such a luxurious outlook, people conceived that their business had accepted legislation and lost a lot of money. On the other hand, there are these austere people like Gandhi, the father of the Indian revolution, who had an effortless and basic look but put much effort into others' well-being and making awareness among people. Judging from the look, one might deduce that since he does not care about his attire seriously, he can not be a beneficial member of society, which is a fallacious construe and conception.
Furthermore, there are other qualities to one person that can be a far more important indicator to one's personality. To point one, the way someone behaves with elderly people or their family can be a good sign of their character. If a person is raised to believe that revering senior members of society is a behavioral code that must be abided by, then you can know that this person has high social standards. Alternatively, when you observe how one treats his family, you can learn how he treats others in the long run. Moreover, another indicator of one's personality is the social group in which a given person is involved. Generally, people socialize with whom they have more in common; for example, if someone's friends are known to be revered members of society who contribute to a lot of philanthropic aid, then that person is likely to have the same qualities, on the other hand, gangsters tend to hang out with gangsters.
To recapitulate, judging others by their attire cannot entirely give you hints of their personality because looks can be deceptive. In addition, other traits like how one behaves with elderly citizens, their own family or the social group that the person hangs out with can be better indicators of one's personality. Had it not been for the looks, the rate of crimes regarding fraud and scams would not have been so high.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2744.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 556.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93525179856 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76760401912 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498201438849 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 876.6 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0878702457 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4761904762 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227835968041 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869023410583 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11929696236 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213131447308 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196701377249 0.0645574589148 305% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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