We need zoos, are you agree or disagree?
Some are inclined toward the opinion that we need zoos, on the other extreme of the rope, some believe that we don’t need zoos and zoos are not necessary for our society. Although both sides take their own position, from my vantage point, the first group carries more weight. I agree with this sentence. We need zoos. Because zoos are educational, fun for families and protect endangered animals.
The first exquisite reason of the current discussion which demands a keen contemplation is that zoos are and educational place especially for students. When I was 10 years old, our teacher took us to the zoo near our school. I had never seen the wild animals such as lion and tiger before and I saw them just in books and on TV. That was a very amusing day for me and I could see many birds so closely too.
Furthermore, zoos are a fun place for families. For example, my family goes out every weekend. So the zoos can be a good place for them to picnic and see different animals. My wife loves animals and she takes a picture with animals and birds everywhere we go. Therefore zoos can be an interesting places for families to be far from home, internet and TV and have a different day.
The third reason coming to my mind cogently substantiate and vindicate my standpoint concerned with this issue is that protecting endangered animals such as Panda. Last year I was in New York and I went to the zoo to see Pandas. I saw there that pandas live in a suitable and safe place. If there are no zoos, those pandas can’t live and their generation will extinct.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad look over the main points and discussions reveals the fact that we need zoos because they are educational, fun for families and protect endangered animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, third, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58359621451 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54200743297 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6103849922 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4736842105 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135879810196 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605311362307 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136143522371 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851524563107 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101746800475 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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