What are some important qualities of a good supervisor? Use specific details and examples to explain why the qualities are important.
Most of them at a workplace has a supervisor unless they are the Chief executive officer or the president. supervisor is the one who assigns their subordinates their work at guides them with it. they are also responsible for coaching and solving issues. For me the important quality of a supervisor are patience, team building skills, interactive, Confidence, Positive attitude, Flexibility.
Most of the supervisors need these qualities to help their subordinate. For example when i was working one of my supervisor was the best. he had all the good qualities of being a supervisor. In this project my supervisor helped me a lot during my learning stages. he used to sit beside me in the early days as i was fresher while i was working and guide me at each and every step. even when i made mistakes he was there to support me and correct them. he taught me write mails efficiently and also to communicate with higher authorities with ease. he was always patient not only with me but with the entire team. he always encouraged us to do what we like and would also help in getting the work which benefits us in the future. he never berated us even when we made mistakes. he did scold us if we repeat the mistakes but that was because we should not repeat them. he never restricted us with anything and was always equal to our wavelength.
On the other hand, when i had to shift to another project there was a change in my manager. The new manager always used to do his own work and never guide us. there were days when he used to push his mistakes on us so that he would not be charged by the higher authorities. he never gave us a good opportunity so that we could shine. he used to push his work on us as well and give us only limited time which was not sufficient for the completion of work. this makes the work environment hostile as we dont feel like working anymore. also we do not have a good communication with each other and the unity of team decreases. And such supervisors do not get the respect of the subordinates
Finally, I conclude that few of these qualities play a very important role to be a good supervisor. As the support and interaction of the supervisor is very important to keep the team intact. The healthy work environment makes people to work happily and easily. if one does not get along with their superiors the work-life balance changes completely and one does not feel like working in that field anymore. so the supervisor plays an important role to build a happy team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53626373626 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64852582529 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443956043956 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.335758635 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7142857143 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53571428571 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139594787331 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492436996644 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653565420315 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10116675384 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301606352534 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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