What is the biggest problem today and do you think this problem will be solved in the future. Use specific reasons and details to support your answers.
Nowadays, people face many crucial problems such as deathly diseases. If someone wants me to choose one of these problems, I would probably choose environmental pollution because I think that it is the most significant problem in our era. Moreover, I believe that this problem will be solved in the future. I think this way for awareness of people and developments in science which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, environmental pollution is the most significant problem today for all humanity and all species. People have been taking advantage of their environments and nature by taking materials for shelter and hunting animals for nutrition. Therefore, negatively changes in environment leads people to be affected negatively. To illustrate, many farmers use artificial fertilizers which include lots of harmful chemicals for living beings instead of natural ones. Besides, Plants growing in these soils absorb these chemical. When people eat these plants, they take these harmful contends in their body. As a result, some research indicates that artificial fertilizers trigger the risk of cancer and heart attack.
Secondly, I believe that this problem will be solved in the future since people started to raise their awareness about this topic. Many advertisements are published on TV, the Internet and billboards. Furthermore, the great number of organizations such as Greenpeace dedicate themselves to take attentions of people about this problem. At the end of these endeavors, people begun to become conscious and started to not pollute the environment. For example, they declined measure of waste materials by recycling them.
Finally, I believe that scientists can solve this problem because of development in science and technology. Scientists are working on a number of difficult issues, such as teleportation or life on another planet, and are investigating how they can accomplish them. I obviously think solving the problem of environmental pollution is not as difficult for them as a teleportation. it will also be easy as people’s awareness of this issue will help scientists when solving this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44179104478 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02052679007 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540298507463 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2367326277 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.15 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242994640991 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836531249834 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100077704287 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1726937555 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765449284896 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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