Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The high school curriculum includes different kinds of courses such as, math, physic, literature and history. courses which we are going to take are chosen by our high school according to the our major like math-science or math-literature. I fell that high schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study for two fundamental reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
The first reason is that course choice affects school success of students. When students take courses which they do not want to study, they usually do not listen to these lessons. Moreover, notes of students decrease after a while for they do not study these lessons because they are boring for them. For example, high school students in my country must take both numerical lessons such as math and verbal lessons such as literature in the firts two years of their education until they choose their majors. However, this situation affects high school students negatively because students who will study in verbal lessons,for example, take physic lesson which is so hard and boring for them. As a result, students receive law grades for they experience some problems like understanding and listening to the lesson.If pupils choose courses which they want to, they take high grades to have interests to these courses.
Second reason is that being allowed to choose to courses to students teaches them to discover and learn themselves what they like doing, and what they want to do in the future. It helps them to choose their major field of study in university. For instance, I have a lot of friends who even though they studied math major at high school, they are studying different majors in the university now through being taken additional courses which helped them to notice their tendency a subject which is not related to math at high school. I want to add something that we can choose additional courses ourselves in my country.Now, they are really succesful in their majors. If they have not been allowed choosing their additional lessons, they would not have to be too much succesful.
To sum up, both effects school success and giving a opportunity of discovering and learning themselves are only two why students should be allowed to study the courses that student want to study by high schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, of course, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98200514139 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51569179409 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462724935733 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4748873242 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.2 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284884966242 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129239807714 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967428858043 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228158049285 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626741896129 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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