What do you believe is the most important problem facing the world today? Why is it the most important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every second, we lose at least a thousand of mothers in childbirths. Not only the significant number but also the fact that it is high burden mortality causes. Furthermore, the problem affects the health and quality of our future generation. I personally believe that the most crucial problem in the world right now is maternal death and I would like to elaborate more in the next paragraph.
First, maternal death made baby motherless. As a consequence, the baby preponderance to die at least twice likely before the age of five compared to a baby who mother survives the delivery process. The function of a family to nurture, to develop, and to cultivate the children will become defective. In a long-term, this problem will affect intelligence and health of our future generation. For example, baby without a mother unable to exclusively breastfeed for minimum 6 months thus they will lose an opportunity to consume breast milk containing immunoglobulin. Immunoglobulin is a very essential to strengthen the immune system. The well-developed immune system would protect the baby from diarrhoea or upper respiratory tract infection.
Second, maternal death put an enormous burden in-country health expenditure. It is a fact that prevention of maternal death relied heavily upon health system input given the emergency management in a complication of childbirth is costly. Take, for example, the emergency caesarian surgery needs an obstetrician, an anesthesiologist and an operating theatre. In addition, a maternal death also contributed to shrinkage of productive workers. Subsequently, the nation depletes of income from declining tax and fiscal input.
Lastly, maternal death is the number one killer of women in the world. Since women are half of the population, the aetiology of their death should be managed properly. The neglect of the problem will affect economics, politics and socially simply from the number of loss life.
All the things considered, I personally believe that maternal death is the paramount problem in the world. In order to resolve the issue, we need collaboration between government, the private sector, and community with a comprehensive approach from every field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omprehensive approach from every field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, second, so, then, thus, well, at least, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41449275362 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11690581657 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.81874023 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9523809524 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0597762210556 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189520933863 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387964379321 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0426412929475 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382762454703 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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