What do you believe is the most important problem facing the world today? Why is it the most important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I personally believe that the most pressing problem in the world right now is maternal death. Every second, we lose at least a thousand of mothers in childbirths. Not only the significant number but also the fact that it is high burden mortality causes. Additionally, the problem affects the health and quality of our future generation.
Maternal death made baby motherless. With this in mind, the baby prevalent to die before the age of five at least double compared to a baby who mother survives the delivery process. The function of a family to nurture, develop, and educate the children will become defective. In a long-term, this problem will affect intelligence and health of our future generation. For example, baby without a mother unable to exclusively breastfeed for minimum 6 months thus they will lose the opportunity to consume colostrums. Colostrum is a very essential to strengthen the immune system and development of the brain. The well-developed immune system would protect the baby from diarrhoea or upper respiratory tract infection.
Maternal mortality also put enormous burden in-country health expenditure. It is a fact that prevention of maternal death relied heavily on health system input. The emergency management in a complication of childbirth is costly. For instance, the emergency caesarian surgery needs an obstetrician, an anesthesiologist and an operating room. In addition, a maternal death also contributed to a loss of a productive worker. Subsequently, the country loses income from declining tax and fiscal input.
Lastly, maternal death is the number one killer of women in the world. Women are half of the population. However, the aetiology of their death cannot be managed properly. This will affect economics, politics and socially simply from a cumulative number of loss life.
All the things considered, I personally believe that maternal death is the most important problem in the world. The solution needs collaboration between government, the private sector, and community with a comprehensive approach from every field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...omprehensive approach from every field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, second, so, then, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42901234568 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06403456307 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1223360427 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4782608696 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.85842293907 467% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811805999664 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025527321308 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682357387171 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627823454301 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688401673263 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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