What is the most useful way to help the natural environment?
• Plant more trees and build parks
• Stores stop providing plastic bags
• Increase access to public transportation to reduce the number of cars on the road.
What is supposed to be the most crucial element that benefits the environment? A general controversy rises up when people concern about the effects of some methods used to eliminate environmental problems. Some people reckon that prohibiting the usage of plastic bags or increasing access to public transportation is the superior choice. However, as far as I am concerned, planting more trees and erecting more parks should be emphasized most and what I state can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, the dominant upside of trees and parks is that they can efficiently tackle air pollution and even can indirectly grapple with other related environmental issues. As we all know, the greenhouse effects and urban heat island effects are imposing greater and greater threats to the maintenance of our plants and lives. The trees and parks that consisted of diversified plants can absorb the carbon dioxide emitted by the vehicles and plants with ease. Needless to say, they can also facilitate species diversity, air circulation, and water circulation. To illustrate, trees can accelerate the movement of water and air molecules, and some large forests are regarded as the lung of the Earth. Diversified plants can provide more animals with comfortable living environments. They can also decrease the loss rate of soil and add more nutrition to the soil, which is conducive to other plants in the future.
Moreover, trees and parks can also reinforce the citizens’ awareness of environmental protection. Trees are beneficial to human beings’ mental and physical health, generating fresh air for people to breathe and relieving people’s eye strains. In addition, parks can also provide ample opportunities for the masses to unwind themselves. If the public is the actual beneficiary of this movement, they will always cherish the benefits that trees and facilities bring to them. Their consciousness will be awakened, and their behaviors will be motivated. The trees and parks are just like the stimuli that always remind people to devote themselves to environmental protection. For example, my parents plant several trees when I was very young, and I really enjoy standing under these trees. Since I benefited a lot from the trees, I decided to cultivate more trees one year later.
Admittedly, stopping utilizing plastic bags and using more public transportation can help the natural environment in a short time, and even cost less. Plastic bags cannot be easily degraded and is detrimental to the environment. Public transportation can reduce the exhaust of carbon dioxide and other poisonous gases that deteriorate the quality of the atmosphere. Nevertheless, it is undeniable that their effects are greatly limited if the masses have no awareness of the essence of environmental protection. At first, the rules may be followed, but with the persistence and accumulation of inconvenience, people may ignore these genuine suggestions and return to their original roads.
In a nutshell, with the reference to the arguments above, planting more trees and building more parks play a key role in the process of safeguarding our green planet. The green resources we leave for our posterity will definitely constitute a steppingstone to a brighter future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, for example, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2759.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33655705996 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01052754172 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520309477756 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 858.6 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0423763823 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.115384615 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8846153846 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274767758686 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738219055515 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720733442972 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155021603512 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623313771989 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 86.8835125448 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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