What qualities do you think a manager should possess in order to be successful in his or her job?
One of the vital positions in any company is management, which leads a giant corporation either to bankruptcy or to profitability. With this in mind, a manager has to have a number of features so as to successfully manage a company, among which being knowledgeable and being fair are most conspicuous.
In the present-day world in which knowledge and technologies develop at a galloping rate thanks to the power computers and artificial intelligence provide for human beings, the existence of a knowledgeable manager who has a good educational background is essential. A knowledgeable manager can be insightful and resourceful. Regarding the insightfulness a highly educated manager can provide for a company using various scientific methods he or she has learned, I can point out to how he or she can predict the future markets and needs accurately in order to invest in a profitable area. For example, in today’s world, the significance of energy, efficient batteries, and sweet water resources is not obscured to any educated and perceptive individual, with the result that a knowledgeable manager identifies them as beneficial investment fields. As to how a knowledgeable manager’s being resourceful can be beneficial for companies, I refer to a situation in which an educated manager observes their company’s problems and difficulties; then, he or she can promptly find out the possible roots of the problems and solve them by virtue of their knowledge acquired in an academic environment.
Another critical characteristic a manager should have is to be fair toward their employees. Inequities are the potential roots of any dissatisfaction. If a manager does not differentiate between employees who are competent and do their best to improve their company and employees who are indifferent about their company and do their duties in a dilatory and inappropriate fashion, the manager will ruin the fundamental rules that bring about an efficient, profitable company. A fair manager, therefore, should create an appropriate incentive for their employees such as raising their salaries and monetary rewards so that employees make more efforts to fulfill their responsibilities expeditiously.
This essay has attempted to present two essential features a successful manager should possess so that the company he or she manages is prosperous. As far as I am concerned, being knowledgeable and fair are of paramount importance among potential qualities a competent manager should have. I wish managers with these qualities are allowed to take charge of companies in order to benefit not only the companies but also their employees and societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...anager has to have a number of features so as to successfully manage a company, among wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41204819277 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34594951233 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0271217637 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.428571429 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6428571429 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19245303747 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825465879928 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621522909986 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137903840864 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646947941842 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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