When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.”
Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Who has never known a classmate who excels in all subjects without ever working? We all asked ourselves one day whether this was because of luck or not.
We can legitimately ask ourselves if people only succeed because of their hard work or if luck is also a factor in success.
We will, therefore, see in the first part, the reasons that lead us to think that success is the fruit of work. Then we will see that in some situations, luck still plays a significant role.
“Hard work works harder than luck!” This quote fits perfectly with the mentality of people who think that work and especially hard work pay more than luck. I will take the example to explain my theory of the existence today of big multinationals. Google, Facebook, Apple and so many others would not be today what they are without their creator. Mark Zuckerberg or Steve Jobs are the epitomai of success, they are now references that are quoted in universities around the world, they represent the success of entrepreneurship at perfection. And yet, it is absolutely not because of an excess of luck, it would be even a lack of respect to think it. These leaders of the largest companies in the world culminate today in the rankings of the richest people in the world (money is unfortunately still the factor of success of reference), they are what they are because of the immense work they provide during years. Because yes, success is not achieved by sitting in a chair, it involves constantly fighting; it is a battle that can only be won by the effort.
It is true, however, that luck sometimes gives a little help in order to succeed. To find out, you just need to go to the Wikipedia page looking for ‘’lists and discovery linked to chance (or luck)’’, to realize that in all areas and domains of activities, luck sometimes gives a hand. Although I strongly think that even if luck sometimes helps, work always pays. It's more than just a sentence, but a way of thinking, a way of life. Bill Gates, creator of Microsoft has 62 years today, this man had a successful life, and he is in command of one of the most powerful companies in the world and represents the definition of success. However, in an interview that he gave to an economic magazine, he said he did not want to stop working despite all he has today. That's why I think this quote: "When people succeed, it's because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. "Is true.
We should be inspired by this kind of sentence to build the future of our young people…..
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to build the future of our young people…..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, as to, i think, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64238410596 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72185878052 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525386313466 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3745639392 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292735198355 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899759733362 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101150640144 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129025743147 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796721232322 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.