When people succeed, it is because of hard work, Luck has nothing to do with success.'' Do you or disagree with the above quotation? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that people adopt multiple ways to get success in their lives. In this regard, striving hard is of paramount importance. There has been no shortage of debates among scholars on whether luck plays an integral role in the stairway to prosperity or hard work is the key element to success. As for this writer’s opinion, I subscribe to the latter idea. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my idea is that success could not be achieved at once. To be more specific, It’s a long and gradual process where people thrive hard to achieve their goals. It is notable, one stroke of luck might be perceived as appealing, but it’s a temporary phase that would not last long. On the contrary, strenuous work might feel to delay your success, but it results in a fruitful outcome. The more people struggle, the more opportunities they can cherish. My brother's experience is a compelling example to elucidate my point of view. He is successful in running an entrepreneurial business and is on the verge of his success. It was not happening all at once. Ten years ago, he started his company with a single employee. When he developed and marketed a product, fortunately, his product received appreciation and higher demand. He continued to develop new products and was able to hire dozens of employees meanwhile. his perseverance and struggles had not gone all in vain, he accomplished his goals. Had not he worked hard to fulfill his dreams, he would not have been able to succeed today.
The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that success could not be possible without extensive planning and research. It is axiomatic that luck could provide any of such experience. Success requires a person’s sincere deliberation, time, and efforts. People might have thought that it’s my brother's luck that he would be successful in marketing his products and continued to be lucky in the future. Yet, realize the fact that he had given his time and money in planning, wholeheartedly. He researched every aspect of higher quality, before marketing his products. . He spent thousands of dollars to establish his company and bore losses as well. As a result, he is what he is now.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that if luck has something to do with success, my brother would not be successful; therefore, hard work is complementary for success. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating, first success cannot be attained simultaneously; second, it is preposterous without efforts. As for the writer’s advice, I vehemently urge people to stop looking for a lucky chance instead of working hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, while, as for, as a result, by and large, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96367521368 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89383403804 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9022321518 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1034482759 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1379310345 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72413793103 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178300867262 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440452933606 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489137206697 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117719427998 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499948490017 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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