When you have a friend for a long time, whether you will continue the friendship even if he or she does something you do not like. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship is one of the important relationship which people have as they share their happiness, sorrow and get supported in their hardship. Though, many friendship may break their bond due to unprecendented consequences. However, personally I will not break my friendship with my old pal despite he/she did something against my interests.
Friendship is between people with different personality and preference for something but resides strong because of their empathy. Sometimes, one friend may not like the things the other craving for. However, It would sound disgusting if they broke their friendship only because of they have different area of interest. In my personal experience was the good paradigm for this statement. After my college days, my best friends and I was about to join the bachelor program for our further study. I desired both of us to study in the same college and career path. But, he liked to purse career in engineering which I was totally disliked. At last, we pursued our respective field of interest in the different college. Though I hated his idea, we are still best friend despite become separated all these years.
Sometimes, circumstances plays key to make jealousy and animosity between the friend. WE cannot be mad for others if we fight or compete with same things at the same time. For instance, in my bachelor program, I and my colleage compete to get the internship position in molecular DNA extraction method of insects. The competition was tough and there was only one position available. Unfortunatley, I was rejected and my friend got the position because of his higher grade. Though situation was against my favor but it would be laughable to blame my friend for my failure.
In conclusion, true friend is hard to find and maintaining relationship a good relationship is even harder. So I believe, we should stop being making comment for other and try to understand the situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87115506579 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564263322884 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4198099907 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.85 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127864530462 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404739770646 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02790122859 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082083465926 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273975973184 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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