which do you prefer city life or country life

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which do you prefer, city life or country life?

Since the dawn of humanity human beings have been involving in a great struggle to find a decent place to live. A question in today’s world, which is a controversial one, is whether living in big cities could be better or country life could be chosen. I- for one- subscribe to latter one on the ground that one can enjoy quite a few advantages in country, among which, having a healthy life, decent environment for children upbringing, and nice people are more considerable.
To begin with, in my point of view, the most important merit of living in country has to do with physical as well as mental health that one can enjoy there. Although big cities have the best hospitals with skillful and experienced staff but cities are afflicted with stubborn diseases as a result of many kind of pollution which cities are faced with. On the other hand, country dwellers has the opportunity to have healthier food and air as well as the mental factors such as tranquility and peace of mind, to name but two.
Second, today our cities are plagued with such social evils, as dishonesty, hypocrisy, and deception so much so that there is no trace of morality among people. With this in mind, consider the corruption-free atmosphere of country life that allows people to bring up their children in an appropriate way which results in obedient children who endowed with positive and charming virtues.
The last but not least reason which reinforces the preceding assertion that country life can be a better choice than city life for humans has to do with kind, warm-blooded, and welcoming people who one meets in country. In the city life because of the fact that people are in a hectic life usually they are not kind toward each others, while in country one can enjoy nice people in his or her neighborhood which culminates in immense emotional satisfaction and maximum enjoyment of life.
In summary, with all these taken into account, I do believe that pros of the country life substantially outweigh those of the city life, in that, one can enjoy a healthy lifestyle, being accompanied with good people in his or her neighborhood, and has a better opportunity to bring up their children properly. Leaving country life with all these charming features simply for finding more money or better facilities in megacities is not reasonable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Since the dawn of humanity human beings have ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...d with stubborn diseases as a result of many kind of pollution which cities are faced wit...
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...llows people to bring up their children in an appropriate way which results in obedient children who ...
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...ive and charming virtues. The last but not least reason which reinforces the preceding a...
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...ind, warm-blooded, and welcoming people who one meets in country. In the city life beca...
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... one meets in country. In the city life because of the fact that people are in a hectic life usually the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, while, as to, in summary, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85964912281 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69180633037 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2923417442 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.583333333 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343117663078 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141572704754 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987761799901 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212505818344 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096262070497 0.0645574589148 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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