Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is one of the best ways to remove exhaustion and make jollification for humans that are living in a hectic life these days. As far as going travel is concerned, some are of the opinion that traveling is joyful as long as one travels with a group of people while others belive otherwise. I for one subscribe to the first idea on the ground that we can utilize our precious time in an efficient way, find new friends and companions, and have a trip with less expenses to name but a few.
To begin with, one of the most important advantages of going trip with a team, which has a leader to guide, is being in the company of the persons who are familiar with the destination can be significantly beneficial in using our limited times in an optimized way. A tour leader can introduce us the best places in the travelled city for spending our pleasure time and can guide toward there. This is a very crucial factor for anyone who goes there for his or her first time.
Second, Going to travels without having some friends can be tedious and soon get monotonous. Another concomitant profit of being in the company of some people in the tour group has to do with finding friends that make our trip more delight. Also, finding new friends has other advantages, take for instance, someone who travels abroad and does not know their language, so being with friends and tour guide helps him or her to make communication with others and convey messages through them easily.
Last but not least reason, which reinforces preceding assertion that going travel with group of people and leader would be a better option, is the low expenses that we can spend in our trip in comparison with going alone. For example, if we want to go shopping in a foreign country, it would be better to have person alongside us who is familiar with the shopping centers there, and consult us for spending our money in an efficient way and also tell us about the souvenirs of that place.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that going travel with good companions as a team and also having a tour leader to guide us will be better option indeed. Since, we can know places that we want to go, find friends that makes the trip more pleasant, and also save our money and spend it in better ways. Imagine how it can be joyful if we have many friends and a leader in a tour.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun expenses is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
..., and consult us for spending our money in an efficient way and also tell us about the souvenirs of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46559633028 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36749136443 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474770642202 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4075335124 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.071428571 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1428571429 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158064438632 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685086776524 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427544671645 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103432763825 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262999613483 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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