Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the unprecedented covering of all the news all over the world by medias, people are prone to news of every detail of any event everywhere throughout the universe. a question about being cognizant of these news is that whether they would be beneficial for people or not, and also should people be aware of them. I subscribe to the idea that it is not important to have knowledge about all the events around the world. The reasons why I believe so are manifold- three of which, however, are of great consequences: distracting our attention from important daily works, having bad news, and mostly being useless.
To begin with, given the consumerist disposition of human being no room is left for squandering the most precious gift of life- time. For example, if we spend our time in front of the TV, watching some news of a new illness spreading in Africa, we would waste our valuable time, which could be utilized to gain some expertise or working out to have a healthier body.
Second, news of crisis in the world catches more attention from people, resulting in showing more bad news from the medias like wars, famines, etc. These awful and disappointing news have a considerable detrimental effect on people's spirit, especially on children's view of world. The result of which would be skeptical people, and future psychological problems would suffer the society.
Last but not least, most of these news are useless. To be more specific, people can not use these kind of information in their lives to solve their problems and attain what they want. They should use their energy to obtain more practical and useful knowledge, which would be profitable for them in their daily life. Moreover, some medias often generate rumors merely to attract attentions and reach more money, which could be a source of confusion for the people who care about the all news.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that people should not waste their time on the unnecessary information releasing by TVs or Newspapers, in order to focus on their own businesses, avoiding sad news, and gaining useful knowledge through other sources. Therefore, we should not pay much attention to all news, but on the important news which are relevant to our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88144329897 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58887615234 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538659793814 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9215197653 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.266666667 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084377081685 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386043069989 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414938357639 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049906850194 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372800335514 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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