As world changes, events from all over the world are sometimes overwhelming. Thus, some people begin to claim that we are not supposed to pay attention to these events since we only have the limited energy. However, things are always not clear-out and defined as people claim. Personally, I insist that we, as one of the members in the world, should know about what's happening around the world, which in terms of results it's always of great benefits. I feel this way for three main reasons, and I will develop these ideas by subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, knowing what happens outsiders is also a good way to learn a foreign language. Independent of gaining information from local newspapers, foreign websites and social medias, which contains a colossal number of videos and articles in English or other languages is an excellent option as well. Studious and diligent, people can improve themselves at an amazing speed from those resources, such as Facebook, twitter, BBC etc. By reading what happens on those platforms, not only do we enlarge our knowledge, we might also master a foreign language.
Secondly, currently you may think it's none of your business to know about events happening outsiders, but it doesn't mean in the future those events wouldn't influence you greatly. In other words, gaining extra knowledge doesn’t hurt. For example, due to intense relationship between China and America, the president of USA has published a ban limiting the Chinese students to work on academic study in America. If you miss this information and meanwhile have a plan to study in America, you could have to hit with an obstacle which you could avoid originally. Thus, paying attention to the news or events occurring outsiders is tremendously helpful in the future for most people.
Finally, knowing about events enables people to accumulate knowledge. Study is by no means only happen in the classroom. In general sense, There are diverse ways of studying, and having broad interests in knowing events no doubt is one of them to expand our horizons. Clearly, you can understand other countries' cultures and traditions easier and deeper through events happening in these counties. While visiting these countries, your trip will be considerably relaxing since you accumulate enough knowledge of these countries' cultures. Contrary to those people who only focus on their own businesses, individuals knowing a variety of events happened recently or past have a deeper understanding of live. Therefore, knowing events enriches people’s life.
In sum, it's essential for us to know about events occurring here and there as much as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel, in general, no doubt, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21478060046 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69976016293 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577367205543 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7528582377 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.636363636 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6818181818 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86363636364 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201687644366 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581056225927 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496883599085 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108129763873 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429867396922 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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