It is obvious that there are various factors that will affect students' success at university or college. In other words, these places play a crucial role in people's future life and their job. Therefore, government should pay careful attention to improve the educational facilities in universities or college because it will directly influence on students' lifestyle. I believe that one of the most important factors that these educational centers should consider is that students have access to tutors in the university or college. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think universities or college are scientific environment which help student to learn a lot of new things and give them a good opportunity to learn required skills and gain enough knowledge in their field of study. these centers using tutors will enable students to be familiar with their favorite activities and to get required skill which will be helpful for their future life. For insrance, when I studies at university in mechanic engineering, i could take part in classes in which tutors taught students playing some musical instruments. Thus, it was a good chance for me to utilize these classes and to learn playing gittar.
Moreover, when some students enter the universities, they have weaknesses in some course which will prevent them from being successful in their studies. As a result, universities can provide them with classes in which tutors help them to improve their knowledge in that area. For example, one of my friends had problems with mathematics and thus he failed in the first semester in this course. Our university decided to hold classes for these students to learn the basics of maths with the help of a famous tutor. It would cause my friend to enhance his math; therefore, he could get a good grade in next semester.
To sum up, in my point of view, one of the most crucial elements in the universities which effectively influence the student' education and helps them to be more successful is tutors. Tutors not only will enable students to overcome their weak points and to enhance their knowledge but also will help them to learn some skills which will be useful for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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...ough knowledge in their field of study. these centers using tutors will enable studen...
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Suggestion: study
...their future life. For insrance, when I studies at university in mechanic engineering, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... at university in mechanic engineering, i could take part in classes in which tu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...versity in mechanic engineering, i could take part in classes in which tutors tau...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
...e to utilize these classes and to learn playing gittar. Moreover, when some students ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ills which will be useful for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65569630382 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491935483871 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0243814012 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245223170206 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932526151548 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594485992452 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164739812185 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338758382457 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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