It is obvious that today with the development of technology, one of the human’s goals is to travel to space and conduct space research. Although spending a lot of money on space explorations will have long-term effects on human life and will increase human’s knowledge about outer space, I strongly believe that it is much better for governments to assign money to other important purposes which will be useful for human beings who currently live on the Earth. In the following paragraphs I will discuss my views using some reasons and examples.
I think that there are more crucial and vital problems all over the world which authorities need to investigate and solve. It is essential that governments allocate a large amount of money to more immediate and urgent matters such as lack of food resources, health services, medical facilities, education, and so on. Therefore, spending money to improve the living conditions of people has top priority over investing a huge amount of money in space research projects. For example, there are many areas around the word in which people do not have access to basic facilities including sufficient food and health care. Thus, government must first try to provide necessary services for these people and invest in improving poor people life.
Moreover, I believe that governments can allot this money to clean the environment instead of funding space explorations. The development of industries has caused destructive damage to the environment. The dirty and polluted environment is the main reasons of most of diseases. In other words, air, soil, water pollution threaten the plants, animals, and human life. Consequently, it is necessary for governments to make a huge investment in keeping the environment clean which will be useful for living organisms’ life and help them to survive. For instance, air pollution has led many people to suffer from heart and lung disease, respiratory disorders, and etc.; hence, governments should pay a lot of attentions to this issued and assign much more money to solve this problem and save the Earth.
Finally, there are many deadly diseases which scientists have not ever found any medicine to cure. As a result, governments can fund scientific institutions in order to have access more facilities to try to find way to cure these diseases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the diseases') or simply say ''most diseases''.
Suggestion: most of the diseases; most diseases
...uted environment is the main reasons of most of diseases. In other words, air, soil, water pollu...
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Line 5, column 663, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...nd lung disease, respiratory disorders, and etc.; hence, governments should pay a lot of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20263157895 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85520737273 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9177695599 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5625 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203913512178 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617114304114 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621706946916 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115465766341 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599778670298 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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