Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It's a waste of money for Government to fund space travel or space exploration.
By developing technology these days, the majority of countries save and spend their budget for space exploration and cyber traveling which is not necessary for these decades. Because of a large number of factors as environmental, industrial, and educational issues. This essay attends to examine these reasons.
In the first step, it is very significant to consider about an environmental issue that is vital for humanity. In the way of explanation, global warming has been a hot topic around the world. For example, the community of counties established an annual program for investing money to solve problems. In particular, air pollution in the world exerts a negative impact on the atmosphere. However, traffic jams and noise of construction in urban is essential for a resident. The main point for addressing all of these issues can be solved by consisting. All in all, one of the factors which are essential instead of exploration in space is a problem that stems from environmental issues.
In the second step, in the emerging countries, the educational system should be improved by the government which needs a considerable amount of money. Children and parents in these countries because of the shortage of money and excellent educational systems cannot study as well as developing countries. Specifically, in the African countries lack of good schools and universities is in these categories. However, in the North American continent investing money in the context of the educational system is very common. In general, it should never be ignored by educational system problems.
Finally, in third world nations, the lack of advances in industrialization has a terrible impact on manufacturing and human resources. For instance, in the middle east, car factories never are developed by the government because of the lack of money and the annual budget. Notably, more money has been considered for military tools. Nonetheless, investing in money for goods can be beneficial for economic factors. To sum up, a shortage of money in the industrial may posh people to intend to immigrate to the developing countries.
In conclusion, even it is essential to consider space exploration. Although some factors like global warming, educational systems and supporting industries need to be improved and considered by the government and all budgets have to spend on solving these setbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...necessary for these decades. Because of a large number of factors as environmental, industrial, a...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are never
...ance, in the middle east, car factories never are developed by the government because of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31662269129 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11184386484 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501319261214 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1069612521 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5909090909 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175435189998 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504399007447 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049036385713 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100682712237 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331795444387 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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