Which of the following would you choose? A job with regular salary and regular working hours OR a job with high salary but long working hours?
Most people have to work in modern society, and working hour prolongs due to increased workload. As a result, some people bring up the idea that work-life is more important than the salary so people should not work overtime. However, I would choose a job with high salary even though the working hour is longer. Below are three reasons to support my claim.
To begin with, I want to earn a lot of money, so job with high salary is a top choice to me. To be more specific, I enjoy fancy food and staying at luxury hotels when I travel, so I need to earn a great amount of money to support my living style. While some people indicate that if they work long hours, they would not have time to do other things. However, in my opinion, I can use my money to hire people to do things that I don’t have time to do, for example, a housekeeper to clean my house and do the laundry for me. Hence, I prefer the job which allows me to earn much money.
In the second place, I like to challenge myself and pursue higher-level position, which usually require a long working hour. For instance, I spent extra time after work to gain knowledge related to my job, and I got promoted fast. If I did not do so, I would not have got the promotion. In addition, all of the directors and general manager in my company work from 8:00 in the morning till 8:00 at night, and sometimes I receive working emails from them in the late night. That is, to pursue a position in higher level management, I have to adapt to the long working hour.
Although some people hold the view that long working hour is stressful, I hold the opposite position. To explain, I would choose a job base on my interest and passion, so when I devote myself to the job and work for long hours, I don't’ feel pressured. Instead, I feel happy and worthwhile. Accordingly, I once heard from a senior colleague told me that although he worked 12 hours a day, he did not feel the work-life balance was a problem, because he really enjoyed his work. That is, his work was an important part of his life. Therefore, I believe long working hour would not bring me much stress.
In summary, I prefer the job with high salary even thought I have to work much time since I need much money to live my desired life. Also, in order to pursue higher-level position, I don’t mind to work long hours, and in fact, I believe I will enjoy my job very much.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, in summary, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3185840708 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37663760311 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466814159292 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2450912438 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7272727273 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389564832045 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131706238308 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113479137648 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245763954976 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754312284872 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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