which one do you prefer telephone or television and why
Before tendering my opinion I guess it is crucial to take quick glance on this argument on both sides. Some people prefer using telephone to reach their family nationwide. But others agree that television impact their life in such a good ways. In my perspective I concur with the first group of people who agree that telephone is much important than television these days. Because of numerous reasons why I subscribed that attitude to elaborate cogently in the subsequent paragraphs.
First reason coming to my mind consolidating my standpoint is telephone considered one of the most essential aspect in our life on this world. Moreover, nowadays we have un-limited access to different kind of technology with just one finger press and telephone is one of these technological devises which everyone definitely needed it in this century. Television impact people’s life by for instance, listening to the news and improve their knowledge about what’s happening all around the worlds.
Second reason I need to give it some attention is communication with each other by using telephone and that solely influence people's life by talking to their family, friends, and neighbors as well in any spot on this world. I agree that telephone is much easier and more convenient to use than different kind of communication devises. So, telephone has upgrade many devises on the last couple of centuries with a lot of new versions.
Additionally, we can use our telephone devises to raise our skills and talents as well. For example, I watched several videos to learn how to paint and now I ‘m expert of paintings on a canvas. In contrast to many people who’s wasting their time by watching television and getting wrong news and that will lead to diminish their liability to do a lot of issues for building their future with thrives and prosperities.
To put it in brief, I strongly agree that television in one of the most essential devices in our life to get better future. To make the life easier and more convenient than few decades ago. In nutshell, In a nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicity of other factors supplementing the aforementioned statements, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i guess, in brief, in contrast, in fact, kind of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02666666667 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87695641646 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0902862718 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.882352941 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219483056605 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616614387447 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425545294613 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111705468995 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413395128335 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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