Which one do you prefer? Why?
1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or
2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days.
Career choice is one of the most important factors in the quality of one’s life. In this regard, many prefer to have an ordinary job, which does not require so much energy and effort and offers them more vacation days. On the other hand, others have the conviction that having a challenging job is a key element to have a successful life. I personally subscribe to the view that it is far beneficial having a challenging job, even though it offers a lot fewer vacation days. I hold this opinion for two main reasons, which I will elucidate in the following essay.
To begin with, challenging jobs can bring us the wealth of professional experience, making us flourish in our own fields. As Albert Einstein is often quoted as saying:’ We cannot solve our problems with the same level of thinking that created them’. Accordingly, challenging jobs require people to improve their abilities to think more creative and complex, forcing them to consider various perspectives instead of being so dogmatic, sticking to only one viewpoint. Moreover, these kinds of jobs enable people to discover other aspects of their abilities, otherwise would remain voiceless. For instance, when I started my job as a structural designer at a small company, my boss ordered me to design a curve rock shed, which no one had ever done in the history of the company. At first, it seemed to be very complex including so many details, but I tried to combine some concepts to invent a new procedure. I got the verification of the procedure from a well-known professor in this field. I do not regret to choose that job since now I am master in designing curve rock sheds so much as sometimes my colleagues call me the mother of rock shed.
Secondly, three-quarters of our life spent on working. Therefore, what would happen if we do not enjoy our jobs? It likes we lose most of our lives doing what we are not interested in. That is, we squander the most precious gift, our time, waiting for vacation days. However, the truth is we will not enjoy our holidays insomuch as we know boring days with tedious projects are coming. According to the scientists what a person really needs in his/ her life to be happy is having a balance between job and hobbies. The more one has a passion for her/his job and strives for working, the more he/ she enjoys vacation days. Therefore, it is far better to choose an interesting carrier so that we would be passionate to get back to work, and therefore have a good time during vacation.
To wrap the long story short, I firmly believe that choosing an interesting and challenging job could benefit people greatly since not only will it cause people to blossom, but it brings more exhilaration to their lives as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1010, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret choosing'.
Suggestion: regret choosing
...known professor in this field. I do not regret to choose that job since now I am master in desig...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agues call me the mother of rock shed. Secondly, three-quarters of our life spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72083333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6797076955 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.051027084 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262424809841 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724358088775 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584106067042 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153961817985 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468800274646 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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