Which one do you think is the most important for high school teacher (age from 15 to 18)?
o the ability to give students advice to plan for their future
o the ability to find which students need help and provide them with help
o the ability to encourage students to learn by themselves outside of the classroom
Without a shadow of doubt, the learning methods that any individual developed can differ from one another, yet no one can repudiate teachers’ roles in teaching not just a specific lesson but a method of learning. Some people are the proponents of the claim that a high school teacher’s most important duty is to teach merely the curriculum he is supposed to teach; however, others hold another perspective and believe that the most important duty of a high school teacher is to encourage students to learn by themselves. The idea, to which I subscribe, is the latter one. My viewpoint is based on quite a few reasons, two of which have been elaborated upon hereunder.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that one of the high school teachers’ goals should be preparing students for the university, for most of the high school students are going to continue their studies in the university. Moreover, the university’s materials are harder to learn as they are harder and at the same time students have less time to learn them. As a result, were they not able to learn on their own, they would not have a good understanding of the materials they are supposed to study. My own experience is a compelling example of this matter. After I was done with high school, I pursued my studies in medical school. At the end of the first semester, most of my classmates were having a lot of trouble, coping with the new situation in which they had to learn different materials on their own, therefore, they failed in a couple of units, but unlike them, I got an A in most of my units, since my high school teacher had prepared me for the university by teaching me how to learn on my own.
The second noteworthy reason is that if people know how to learn on their own, they would be more self-confident. As we get older, we are going to be in different situations, in which we should deal with new impediments. Moreover, considering the fast pace of the technology’s development, we should always keep learning new things to be always up-to-date. As a case in point, when I started doing research in graduate school, my professor told me that he needed me to know the programming language R and Photoshop, so we could use them in the research projects. Furthermore, not only was I not familiar with them, but also there were not any classes at the moment, but since I knew, I could figure it out on my own, I started to learn them using YouTube and practicing without the help of a supervisor.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that the most important role of a high school teacher is to encourage children to learn by themselves, for it can help them to prevail over the upcoming challenges in the university and it can augment their self-confidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'A' is left.
Suggestion: an; A
...couple of units, but unlike them, I got an A in most of my units, since my high scho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83467741935 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1699780845 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477822580645 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.880084608 48.9658058833 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.461538462 100.406767564 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1538461538 20.6045352989 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231961504003 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844400212998 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673114967557 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150707255236 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437582056059 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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