Which one of the following is the best way to find a job successfully?
1. Ask a friend about job vacancies (in person or through social media)
2. Send a letter about yourself to the company
3. Search for company advertisements through newspapers and other media
Undoubtedly, job is an integral part of our lives, which we need to make a living. There are multitude ways people try to find their dream jobs. WHile some try to connect with their fellow to offer them a job position, others serach through internet or communicate with comapnies. In my opinion, nowadays, it is easier to search on the Internet for job applications rather than other ways. In what follows, I delve into my reasons.
To begin, an unemployed person will find more job opportunities surfing the net or magazines. Thanks to the Internet, finding myriad job application is much convenient using computers or even smart phones. Many job reviewer companies are advertise and manage diverse jobs opennings for companies and factories they need employees. For example, when I moved to boston two years ago, I was looking for a pharmacy technician or intern job position. I serached the web and found many diverse applications that they render other companies openning through thier websites. I download some of those specific applications on my apple Iphone. Building my personal account with all information that they need, I was sure that I put my nail on the head, and just wait to see some reply from one of them. It just took a few days, till one of them give me several job offers from different pharmacies or hospital in my neighborhood. I chose the best one based on my circumstance. Had I not used that search tools and the Internet for finding job openning, I could not have found my dream job very soon.
Moreover, compare to the number of our friends who might help us to find job vacancy, or the limited number of companies with them we can communicate about their job positions, the suitabilty of job positions we are able to apply through those web browsers or newspapers is unique and worthwhile to spend time. Companies advertise their job vacancies with detail requierments and more info about all condition, which give the applicant all data that they need to understand about the job. To put it into perspective, one friend of mine started his job in his friend factory as soon as possible after graduation. He would be lucky to start his related job to his majors. But after a few weeks, he was anxious because his work environment and his boss expectation were beyond what he thought at first. Based on this conflict, he could not deal with his first job and it turned to a recipie for disaster for him. He was worry if he quite his job, it would be a negative point in his resume. He suggest me not rely on friendship only when I want to choose a job, because there is a huge difference between work and friendship.
In sum, I strongly believe that the Internet and magazines advertisement for job openning is the best way to find a job. This is becuase you can find a host of job applications and because you will see details information about job requirements and benefits which help you consider them when you are makind decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2450.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69348659004 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69476433453 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509578544061 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1509889106 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.88 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331309833299 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957262353426 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693731838454 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207172622731 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280062419708 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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